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This works for me and I'm not even a poetry person:-).
Reverse psychology in action? I know the pain of your MC. Well done!
Very clever rhythm and rhyming - all tucked inside a fun read.
I have such a hard time with poetry. Usually I read the first two stanzas and can't read anymore. But this caught and held my attention the whole way through. I love this piece. It's funny, relatable, and has a great end. Great job!
This is great and, if I could write poetry like you can, sounds like something I would write because I identified with every line. It flows nicely. The rhymes are great. The message is outstanding and you sprinkled some great humor in it.
This is great. Nice rhythm and rhyme, and you had me smiling and chuckling all the way through. Well done!
You must know me. This is delightful. I found myself smiling all the way through.
Your poetic flow was anything but clumsy. I didn't stumble my way through your cadence or trip over your imagery. Well done.
So clever - made me laugh!
*smile* Spilling food on the our shirts runs in our family. (How can someone inherit that?)
This made me laugh. I loved it.