The Official Writing Challenge
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04/18/19
Loved this line: Mum said I could trip over a thought that had fallen out of her head.
This is the 2nd article that I've read where the clumsiness went away when Christ entered their lives. Can that really be so? Well done!
04/18/19
I enjoyed the lightness and your build-up to the positive end.
You do a nice job of pacing the story, sprinkling it with humor, and ending it with a great message.
Congratulations on ranking 12 overall. Happy Dance!