The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow! This is beyond my words. You touched my heart in many ways (plus I learned a new word, which is always a plus!). The pictures you painted on my mind could only have been etched by a true artist. Even though poetry isn't one of my favorite genres, this is definitely one of my all-time favorites.
Obviously a master poet!

Well done...interesting and different take on the topic. Very unique approach.

Nicely done,

Nice imagery and flow in this poem. It has a calming effect, and it made me smile. Well done. :)
Oh, this is exquisite! Excellent job!
Beautifully written poem, Sally. Congratulations on your 1st place finish.
Superb imagery - taking the ordinary and making it royally extraordinary. I'll never look at a dandelion puff again as just a weed in seed. Congrats on your first place finish.
Wow! I'm really late on my comments, but trying to get caught up. Just beautiful, and congratulations on getting 1st place!