The Official Writing Challenge
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10/18/18
Lovely poetry. God bless.
10/19/18
Beautiful poetry, beautiful message.
10/19/18
Beautiful and encouraging
10/20/18
Thank you so much for sharing this deeply touching poem--full of truth and encouragement. You have truly used your gift well.
10/21/18
Eager to share these encouraging words with my 95-year-old friend who keeps wondering why she is still alive.
Awesome job. I can totally relate. I'm sure this will touch those who suffer with chronic illness, depression, and just aging. You did a great job of putting so much feeling into this piece.
Thank God for Christian writers! You can still write, that's for sure. When I was 21, I was led to the Lord by a woman who passed on into heaven 100 years before I was born...by a book she wrote. You will still be encouraging others with these words for the next 500 years too...if the Lord tarries. Joy to you! And thank you.
10/25/18
Your entry was both heartbreaking and encouraging. I'm sure many who read it can relate to your message, so perfect in its rhyme and rythm. But in spite of your circumstances, God has not put you on a shelf for no reason. He is still using you in ways that you don't even know, through your posts, your writings, your personal testimony. This lovely poem I'll remember for a long time.
Congratulations on ranking 11th overall. Happy Dance!