The Official Writing Challenge
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A beautifully well-written story. I may have shed a tear at the end. God bless.
I was interested in your story from the very first line, and I loved the last line the best. I particularly enjoy stories which reveal a truly worthy character. Your worthy, not wasted, man is one that will live in my memory. This was excellently written.
This heart-warming story brought tears to my eyes. Thanks so much for sharing. Great work here. We'll see if the judges like it as much as I did. God bless.
Great job presenting the contrasts and building toward your conclusion. I enjoyed the challenge to look at people and success from a different perspective.
Whether or not this places, it is a winner! Loved the story.
Great story thanks for sharing
it. Bud left you a great legacy.
Congratulations on your EC win!
So simple, yet so brilliant. You really got to the heart of what waste really is. Congratulations on a well-deserved 1st place win!
I enjoy reading your true life stories. :) Congrats on your win!
Congratulations on your well-deserved win - for the way you have used the contrasts to build the suspense to a brilliant close. And all the more because it's true!
This was beautiful! Thank you for the reminder of where our treasure is best kept. Loved it!
Congratulations on your 1st place win!

I shared your story with a couple of coworkers.

People tend to choose the King Sauls of the world--tall, dark, handsome, and rich while God chooses the shepherd boy, David--a man after God's own heart