The Official Writing Challenge
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03/16/18
Yes! My kind of ending! I loved this story...Well done!

Blessings~
03/17/18
I really enjoyed your story which is right on topic. Good to see the greedy one get her come-uppance at the end too.
03/18/18
Very good story.
This is a great story. You drew me in right away. I felt so sad for Grace because I can't imagine family acting like that. I noticed a slight POV shift at the end, but overall you did a great job. You definitely nailed the topic. Congratulations on ranking 13 overall. Happy Dance!