The Official Writing Challenge
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03/16/18
Great! I really loved this one...it was wonderful.

Blessings~
03/18/18
Thought-provoking story.
03/22/18
I really enjoyed your take on this topic and the way you had your MC talk to God. Her difficulty in being quiet and meditating resonated with me. It's not easy! Told with humour and realism. Well done!
03/23/18
Very relatable. I liked how real she was in her time to meditate as she talked to God. Well done.
04/04/18
I'm thinking Father would be having a chuckle over this.
I like the way the character progressed from the struggle to fully embracing the experience.
A healthy reminder for me to spend concentrated time with God, that's for sure.

Ways to improve it?
Hmm. Not much. Maybe I would have used some punctuation differently, and brackets for (aside) comments. But that's my style.