The Official Writing Challenge
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03/16/18
Nicely done!
Blessings~
03/18/18
Good story.
03/22/18
Congratulations Jan on your 2nd place EC for this amusing story of greed. I even learnt a new word from your story: gewgaw. I'll enjoy using that! I liked King Trevor getting his comeuppance at the end too.
03/24/18
Congratulations on your 2nd place finish, Jan.

The people in the desert can finally breathe again (without paying for it any way). Very clever storytelling.