The Official Writing Challenge
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03/16/18
Good job with the topic, nicely done.

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03/18/18
Very nice story.
This is great. I really enjoyed every word. The wisdom of the mom was great. I wish she had not let him get away with calling her dumb, but that just shows how vested I was in your MC! Great take on the topic.
04/04/18
Well done. I like how you showed the MC as human and paying for a mistake but still trying to impress values on her children.