The Official Writing Challenge
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03/16/18
Wonderful job with the topic, I enjoyed it.

Blessings~
This is a great story. You did an awesome job of pulling me in and creating a sense of suspense. My only red ink is Bible is the name of a book and should be capped. I thought your ending was great. I'm good at guessing endings but I didn't see this one coming.