The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved the title of your story. It can be difficult to communicate to your husband when life gets in the way.

Well-written story.
I agree; excellent job of tying in the ending to your title. Thanks for reminding us that marriage is not a "maintenance free" mechanism. It requires a good deal of work to keep it running smoothly! Well written!
I loved this budding Amish romance. Your dialog flowed nicely yet still felt authentic. It's amazing how just being honest can make a difference. I enjoyed this. Congratulations on ranking 19 overall. Happy Dance!