The Official Writing Challenge
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03/03/16
This one completely fooled me and I loved it! Well written!
03/05/16
Well done!

Blessings~
03/06/16
Cute. Clever build-up with enough clues strewn across the path to keep suspense building - while keeping suspicion at bay.
Well done.
03/06/16
I was completely fooled. I assumed that it was an affair, not a relationship with Jesus.
Well done.
This is definitely one of those stories that's better the second time around. I know a lot of people know what it feels like to have that hole, that longing. You did a great job of showing that pain.
Congratulations on ranking 24 overall. Happy Dance!