The Official Writing Challenge
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03/06/16
I like your descriptions and the doorway into your MC's thinking. Sad about the word limit's intrusion in what looks like a much longer and even more absorbing story.
03/06/16
I picked grapes for one afternoon; it was hard work. I'm glad you came to realize that you had nothing to be ashamed of.
I enjoyed this story. I remember being 13, what a difficult year. My heart ached for your young MC. I understood her pain and think you did a great job of telling the story.