The Official Writing Challenge
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02/19/16
Interesting read and interesting take on the theme. I was surprised by the ending. Good job!
It a great take on Indefatigable. I was surprised and I love surprises. Before I understood where the story was headed I was laboring with the frequent use of what I felt to be 'ponderous' words. It wasn't an easy piece to read but worth it.
02/24/16
I had to read the para. beginning Years earlier due to the length and complexity of same. It was certainly an interesting piece, and I was also surprised by the ending.
This was really interested. Not at all what I expected. You had me hanging onto every word and made me stop and think. Nice job.
Congratulations on ranking 24 overall. Happy Dance.