The Official Writing Challenge
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I was hoping for a hopeful ending, and you delivered in a most creative way. I also think you did a good job realistically depicting the tension between them.
This was a great read. I loved the descriptions and had several nice chuckles. I liked that the ending wasn't wrapped up too neatly, but it still offered hope.
08/03/15
A powerful story with a glimmer of hope as the light comes filtering through in the ending...well done.

God bless~
08/03/15
I'm glad the couple could laugh at the end. Sometimes, the best medicine is finding humor in the situation.
08/06/15
Congratulations!

God bless~
Congratulations! Happy Dance!
This "EC" winning story felt so real, I truly enjoyed it!
08/06/15
Congrats on your EC. You've encapsulated so much of your MC's thinking without submerging anyone in it. (You saved that part until the end!!!)
Well done.
08/08/15
Congratulations, Leola. I enjoyed this story. You did well at keeping the tension going between the two characters and bringing in a glimmer of hope at the end. Great writing!
Congratulations on your EC!
08/08/15
Laughter is the finest medicine. Nicely written piece my dear.
08/09/15
I loved when she caught him with the fishhook. :) Your details brought their adventure to life. I'm so glad the truck could be salvaged. Excellent title for this! This is great! <3