The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a sweet story. You did a great job of painting a picture for me. I also squirmed because I remember how hard 9th grade was. Your ending was great. It's a nice reminder.
02/20/15
Awww. I loved this whole story. It was an excellent read along with superb writing.

God bless~
02/22/15
Your descriptions drew me into your story, and I liked its leisurely pace - despite your MC's inner conflicts - as your built up to a positive close.
02/23/15
This story was reminiscent to me. I remember making a life-changing (in a bad way) decision to not be a 'square' in favour of fitting in and focussing on being liked.
Her low opinion of herself is common to many teenagers. The example of the new girl, resplendent and confident in Christ, definitely reflects the answer of our identity in God.
Congratulations! Happy Dance!!
02/26/15
Congrats!

God BLess~
02/26/15
Great story with a sound message. Congratulations!
02/26/15
Hey, congratulations on your EC and HC. Well done.