The Official Writing Challenge
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You did a nice job of showing that even Godly men and ministers are still human. I liked the twist ending. I wasn't expecting it at all. You did a great job of bringing the scene to life.
02/20/15
Fabulous story!

Didn't see the ending coming at all. Superbly done.

God bless~
02/22/15
You've depicted a wide spectrum of attitudes that I feel may need more room to develop than the 750 word limit that the Challenge sets for us. This is a good synopsis of a larger story in which you could fully develop your characters and their individual journeys along the way.
I saw the parallel with parable of the vineyard very clearly. I loved this modern-day version of it. I loved the interaction between the characters.
Congratulations on ranking 15th overall! Happy Dance!
Congratulations on ranking 15th overall! Happy Dance!