The Official Writing Challenge
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Spot on! Aesop's fables are just that - fables. You have told it like it is and not just a story for the sake of a moral lesson. Thank you for realism and doing it so well. Are any more coming? Perhaps the boon goons have a lot more to answer for in other fables where we have been given a mickey.
PS I am all for turning Aesops fables into adventure stories.
11/21/14
This was clever and well done. Great work.

God bless~
11/21/14
This will go down in history; and you shell never hare the end of it because you've tortoise all so much background detail we'd never suspected was there.
11/26/14
This was funny, clever, enthralling and a real pleasure. Every word, every sentence, essential and delicious.

I MUCH prefer this to the original, and I will NEVER hear the original again without thinking about your story. Hmmm. I may have to print out a copy of this fantastic story so I can wave it in the air and present the real truth when faced with the lies of the Aesop tale (lies! they're all lies I tell you)!
This was a delightful read. I think I'll wait a few years before sending it to my grandkids, though. :D
Congratulations on your EC. Thanks for bringing so much fun into Mr Aesop. I always adored his fables. In case anyone was offended by my previous comments, they were all tongue in cheek.
11/27/14
I'm so thrilled your memorable clever story got this high placing. Yay! I'm doing a dance for you, teehee.
11/28/14
Congrats!
God bless~