The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 519 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
11/20/14
Gripping! I think I was most distraught at the dropping of the Nikon - noooo! You kept the suspense right through until the end and had me eagerly reading on to see if the MC would in fact, be chomped?! Well done.
11/21/14
Great title and great story!
Well done and spot on topic.

God bless~
11/22/14
Show, don't tell? I'm seeing, feeling, hearing - and smelling. Loved the graphic descriptions - and the fact that the only danger facing me is that my laptop battery is running low.
11/26/14
This was BRILLIANT! I loved it in a dancing-on-the-inside way, experiencing adrenalin second-hand (edge of the seat, glad I'm not them). The characterization of Richard's guide was so cleverly captured - in voice, description, and humor. Yay! So good.
11/26/14
This was BRILLIANT! I loved it in a dancing-on-the-inside way, experiencing adrenalin second-hand (edge of the seat, glad I'm not them). The characterization of Richard's guide was so cleverly captured - in voice, description, and humor. Yay! So good.
11/28/14
Congrats!
God bless~