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11/21/14
This really was quite the story, it seemed like a scenario that may have happened.

Well done, and I loved how the little boy thought the crab was beautiful!

God bless~
11/23/14
This one really crabbed my attention. Great profiles of the children's thinking and dialogue.
11/26/14
This was beautiful. Beach-combing is one of my favorite adventures so I was inwardly sighing with pleasure as I read your story. I really loved the line '...the dismay linking solemn faces...'

I was confused in one part. I thought it was the plump girl, not Miss Glenny, that urged them to race to the rock pool. It only took me a couple of sentences to get my balance back (teehee)but thought I should mention that in case it helps.

Every sentence and word choice was lovely. It was a gentle, heart warming piece.