The Official Writing Challenge
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This certainly was perfect for the topic, quite an adventure along with a well written dialogue.

Great job, and wonderful message.

God bless~
A gentle illustration of God's grace at work - even when we might prefer him not to do too much at all. Good lesson here, with strong touch of authenticating the scenario for us. Well done.
This story grabbed me from the first sentence and kept me reading because of your paced dialog and scene-setting imagery. Great message found in the conclusion of this winning entry.

Great story with very interesting history.

You're on a roll. Is this three ECs in a row? :)
Congrats JK!
Can I get some writing lessons? LOL

God bless~
Congratulations. This held my attention to the last word.