The Official Writing Challenge
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11/21/14
This certainly was perfect for the topic, quite an adventure along with a well written dialogue.

Great job, and wonderful message.

God bless~
11/21/14
A gentle illustration of God's grace at work - even when we might prefer him not to do too much at all. Good lesson here, with strong touch of authenticating the scenario for us. Well done.
11/24/14
This story grabbed me from the first sentence and kept me reading because of your paced dialog and scene-setting imagery. Great message found in the conclusion of this winning entry.
Congratulations!

Great story with very interesting history.

You're on a roll. Is this three ECs in a row? :)
11/28/14
Congrats JK!
Can I get some writing lessons? LOL

God bless~
Congratulations. This held my attention to the last word.