The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 693 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
08/29/14
I've seen this Biblical story written many times before, and each time another aspect is brought to the forefront. This was one that brought the MC's torment and fear forward, and illustrated the love of our Lord and Savior vividly.

Great job your retelling this well known passage.

God bless~
Interesting embellishment for the familiar Bible story.
09/03/14
You did a wonderful job coming at this story from a unique angle.
Loved you title as Jesus is the Face of Mercy.
You tied it in to the topic with your fabulous answer.
Interesting retelling of this story. I never considered that she was innocent, only that the other party was missing.

I imagine this woman had great love for Jesus.
I really liked your telling of this familiar story. Especially the ending.
Congratulations on ranking 15 overall! Happy Dance!