The Official Writing Challenge
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When I first read this through, I was thinking we should be careful for what we pray for, but then as I read and felt the love and warmth and safety going through offered - then I thought what fools we might be for not taking it upon ourselves. Hope I interpreted this right, but that is what spoke to me and I really enjoyed its message.
This is so lovely. Not only does it flow effortlessly but it has a great message. I love using the thesaurus to find new words. You manged to combine that in poem form with a great message, all while staying on topic.
Enter in
Take up space
Rule my heart
Wear my face

These were my favourite lines. I loved the structure of the poem. Short, snappy lines that punched truth into my heart.
Brilliant! God bless~
This is a lovely poem of surrender and commitment. Great work!
Poignant, mesmerizing. This has my soul singing.

Loving you in through and because of Jesus, the Christ . . .

Have you "thrown a brick"?
Thank you for glorifying God with your true, honest, just, pure, lovely, good, virtuous and praiseworthy winning entry! God bless you.

Love and verbal hugs, Judi

KJV Revelation 14:12 "Here is the patience of the saints: here are they that keep the commandments of God, and the faith of Jesus."
The simple, persistent, innocent hunger to be filled to overflowing with God's grace comes through so clearly. A well-deserved HC
Congrats! God bless~
So many profound thoughts contained in each of these small clusters of words--fabulous!!
Such a tender prayer. I loved the lines:
Yielded heart
Yielded soul
Yielded mind
Give You control
Congratulations on your EC and HC awards.