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Oh this was a charming story. I could feel the MC's ambivalence pour off the page. I think you did a marvelous job of developing the characters. The inner conflict and turmoil seemed a perfect match and kept the story moving at just the right pace.
This pulled me in immediately and touched my heart. Nicely done.

God bless~
I was scolding your MC all the way through this - and then wept with her at the end. Courtly, gentlemanly behavior is rare today - and demonstrates the beautiful gift of caring beyond oneself. If we can only learn to receive gratefully and gracefully what is offered to us - through our Christ most especially, yes?

Loving you in through and because of Jesus, the Christ . . .

Have you "thrown a brick"?