The Official Writing Challenge
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03/03/16
I love the refrain of this hymn.
03/04/16
I could see some relationship to the topic, but I thought it could have been brought out more clearly. All that you said was certainly true. I just would have liked start to be a little clearer.
03/04/16
So interesting!
Blessings~
That is my favorite hymn. I remember the first time I heard it. I had to sit down because I was overcome with emotion. I wasn't sure I saw a strong showing of the topic, although I could see you touching on it. I'd have loved for you to go even further and maybe explain why this song speaks to you, sharing an event where it really hit home. It is a nice devotional. You back up your message with Scripture and give the reader something to think over. Good job.
03/09/16
I think about the many whom I have heard say, "I don't know how I would face this without the Lord". Facing tomorrow can be daunting. You have reminded us of our reassurances in the word, which is encouraging. In a devotional, I'm a lover of personal anecdote to apply the truth. Have you considered trying this?