The Official Writing Challenge
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03/03/16
I love the detailed descriptions! Wish I could be there with that view!
03/03/16
You created a beautiful backdrop to your story. I felt I was living these moments through the MC.
03/04/16
Loved the descriptions. I was right there with Ted. I wish you could have used the word Bible less and still manage to get your point across. I also think the word should be capitalized.
03/04/16
Excellent!
Blessings~
Beautiful story and so well written. Your descriptions were excellent. Good luck in the challenge!
Delicious descriptions and good writing of story.
03/08/16
Great way to start the day. I am a bit envious of the prospect from that verandah. Nice piece of writing that clearly created a tranquil picture in my mind.
03/09/16
A beautiful, familiar description of a treasured Australian landscape, in a story that reflected the topic, "start", very well.
Congratulations on ranking 7th in your level and 20th overall. Happy Dance!
Belinda, Such vivid descriptions. It made me want to visit that quiet retreat.
Well written piece.

Congratulations on your 7th place and 20th overall.

You are certainly deserving.