The Official Writing Challenge
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10/12/23
Great job! I sure hope this places well!
10/13/23
An interesting cultural contrast with a good segue to a devotional.
10/18/23
I really enjoyed you discription of the contrast seen between cultures in what is valued. And the segway into the contrast between those who put there value in God first
and those who put everything else before God.
I enjoyed this format. It is great for a small group or Bible study. I really liked how you added the prayer too. You made some great points. Believe it or not, the first child abuse case in the US was investigated by an animal rights group because it was illegal to hurt your pet, but not your child. That speaks volumes and we've made progress in the last century, but still have far to go. This article would be gr eat to open discussions and help people get help. You did a fine job of writing on topic without using topic word or coming off preachy. Well done.
10/19/23
Look at you! You are doing so well! I'm so proud of you.

Well done, Congratulations!