The Official Writing Challenge
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You make some great points in this poem. It made me stop and think. Poetry is not my best genre, but at times I thought the flow needed a bit tweaking. Many submissions this week were on topic yet never used topic word. That's not easy to do for sure, but often feeling the topic instead of seeing the word can be way more impactful in many cases. You did deliver a clear Christian message and I enjoyed that you ended with a great Scripture. Nice writing.