The Official Writing Challenge
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12/02/22
Catchy and engaging from the beginning through to the end.

Thank you! Blessings to you in all that you do all your days. :-)
This is an interesting piece. I enjoyed how you brought the message together with the Bible verses. Some of the transitions felt a bit sudden.The first part and second part feel like they could be two separate articles. The sudden bringing of narcotics in the end when not mentioned earlier felt sudden too. I do appreciate your message though and it's very timely for today's world. You make some great points that make the reader stop and think.