The Official Writing Challenge
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08/11/16
I enjoyed your story. It was well thought out and crafted. You got your point across by sharing past relationships and thinking there will always be time to find that happiness. I recently lost my spouse whom I loved with every fiber of my being, he was also my very best friend and co-writer. Your ending of at least not being lonely made a very valid point. Great job.
08/12/16
Good story, well written. I saw several punctuation errors such as commas which should have been semi-colons, and in one sentence a lack of commas. Overall, well done though.
Congratulations on ranking 6th in your level. Happy Dance!