The Official Writing Challenge
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08/16/16
Good story. It was creative. Good dialogue. Suspenseful.
08/17/16
I apologize about the one long paragraph. There was a glitch when I submitted and I lost my paragraphs.
08/17/16
I liked the story. often talking to loved ones about God and Salvation is hard. They seem to listen to someone who is not so close, maybe something to do with pride and not wanting to admit they have a need.
08/18/16
I love the action in this and the sister brother relationship with a little bit of humor. Great job Sandra.
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