The Official Writing Challenge
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03/10/16
That was cute. I wouldn't have used the word ferhoodle there at the end. It seemed too unnatural.
03/11/16
I loved this! Well done.

God bless~
This is cute, and a good concept, but the light would have been the same as usual, since they didn't change their clock ahead.
03/16/16
Your first line attracted me, and it was an easy story to "stay with". The kind of thing one might recount to a friend. Nicely written.