The Official Writing Challenge
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03/11/16
Very interesting and compelling story.

God bless~
03/15/16
"Ferhoodled" is a good word for the confusion and demanding pressures upon a young person, and your story conveyed that well. Multiple, diverse thoughts, self accusation, duplicity - you managed to describe all of that, and end with a touch of hope. I enjoyed it.
Your weaving of the allegorical thread was so skillful that I was not certain of it until the end. It reminds us that we are all under the Master Builder's construction.
If this does not receive an EC, in my humble opinion, it indicates that the judges did not take the time for a second read, to savor the genius of this piece.