The Official Writing Challenge
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This is truly outstanding! Your sentiments of love flow beautifully through this piece always referring to scripture. Well Done!
I loved the flow of this love letter to God. I'm glad the MC was able to find joy again.
Lovely. I especially liked "winds of sorrow".
What an honest look at how troubles can make it difficult to "find God." I liked the line "my pen became an instrument of joy." God bless your in your writing!
God is the most deserving of a love letter. He is love. Thanks for a beautiful piece of writing.
This was like a Psalm, with both praise and lament. It was intimate. I found that I wanted to know HOW the Holy Spirit had healed you....perhaps you did not feel that an intimate description of this was warranted, but to one suffering, such a conclusion could be a strong message of hope. Just a suggestion for a lovely piece of writing.
Congratulations on ranking 10th in your level. Happy Dance!