The Official Writing Challenge
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05/23/24
Wow. I LOVED this. So powerful, so beautiful. My only suggestion would be to put spaces to make it easier to read. Other than that, excellent job.
05/24/24
This is a really powerful message of hope and encouragement. But I would agree that putting some space between lines, even paragraphs, would make it much easier to read.
Keep on writing.
This is a beautiful piece. As someone with a significant chronic illness and pain, I felt like you wrote this just for me. The repition of pick up your mat is perfect and really hits your message out of the park.