The Official Writing Challenge
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09/05/19
Wow! Fantastic writing and wonderful truth. Love this piece!
Wonderful descriptions and metaphors. I can relate, and it kept my attention.
I love how you interwove the ocean theme throughout your piece! As a lover of the ocean, this touched me in how it can be both scary and a refuge. Well done!
09/09/19
What a nice piece. This was my favorite line - "...refuge can be a frame of mind that comes with a peace in knowing that whatever is going on around you – you are safe." Good job.
09/10/19
Superbly written!
Thank you,
Blessings~
09/12/19
There is so much truth packed into this piece, and I am sure there are others like myself who can relate to the issues you write about. Good writing.
You did an awesome job of describing the darkness and the fear and your message at the end is simply brilliant. Congratulations on ranking 1st in your level.