The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow. Wow. Wow.

Even though I knew from the first line who this story was about, the way you wrote it was eye-opening. I was there with Samson as he went through all of this. His regret, his fear, his hopes to be remembered.

Well done, and I predict you will be in Masters before too long. This was materfully told.
First question is, "Why are you at this level?"
Second, "Are you aware how talented you are?"

Finally, excellent job, I suspect you will climb up rapidly.

Wonderful and insightful job about Samson...excellent job. and right on topic!

Wonderful, vivid descriptions that puts the reader right in the middle of the scene. Excellent writing. You won't be at this level long.
A seemingly loose link to "hair," but an obvious one to those of us who recognize the story. Very well done. Super descriptions and very insightful.
You have a gift. Keep writing!
You told this story with excellence. I wouldn't be surprised to see it in EC. You truly have a writing gift.
Great job with this story. You held my attention throughout. Keep writing!
You did an excellent job of retelling the story. I was pulled in from the first words and hung on until the very end.
I am green with envy! This was so well written that I had to check to make sure I was reading the right level. You should be in Master's, there's no doubt about it. You should write a screen play about this or at least, a historical novel. Great job! Great writing ! Kudos!
I agree- you should be in masters! I've read through most all the entries now, and yours was the only one about Samson. That was the first idea that popped into my head when I was thinking about what to write! Well done, and I sure hope this places!
I love historical fiction, and you did this so well. We'll never know what our heroes of the Bible were thinking, but you can just imagine Samson saying those things. You did an excellent job of giving him a voice.