The Official Writing Challenge
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07/11/19
Wow! This was simply powerful!

I was drawn in completely, number one, because I love animals, but, your journey told a story, that opened up your epiphany and realization that will witness to many.

Great job & great message!

Blessings~
This is a great story. You pulled me in right away. I can totally relate to dog fur everywhere as I own Pomeranians. The topic might be a little weak. Even though you mention hair in the beginning and the end, if I didn't know the topic, I'd guess dog. The message is great though. It's one we all need to be reminded of from time to time. You've done a great job of taking me on a journey. Keep reading other entries and writing.
I like how you started with Hair? Hair! That really clinched your point.
07/18/19
I have a chocolate lab, so the hair issue really hits home. Dogs have so much to teach us about God's attributes, and you wrote that out beautifully.