The Official Writing Challenge
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Awww. Such a poignant story. I also live in California, and I pictured the National Cemetery in Riverside, where my dad is. Except it was not raining that February afternoon, but it was cold and overcast. Your descriptions were right on.
04/27/19
Oh this touched my heart very deeply...well done, well said, and powerful close.
Thank you,
Blessings~
04/29/19
Thanks for sharing this memory. And thanks to your father for his service.
05/01/19
Oohh, this is good. Emotional. I particularly loved the reference to being offended if the sun had chosen to shine that day. Quite beautiful and poignant.

~God bless.
This is Beautiful. You paint such a poignant picture. Congratulations on your EC. Happy Dance!
05/05/19
Powerful story filled with emotion. I hope we never forget the sacrifice any soldier gives for his or her country.
06/27/19
Congratulations on winning the quarterly award on this emotionally charged story!