The Official Writing Challenge
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04/26/19
Cute story! I noticed some misplaced punctuation marks. I've learned to read the story backwards to edit it. I've caught many errors that way- double words, spacing issues... I liked your use of the child's way of talking.
04/27/19
Awww! I loved this story, thank you for the message and your entry.
Blessings~
04/29/19
Sweet story with good reminder of Who reigns.
05/02/19
This is really sweet! I can't imagine a 5 year old being patient enough to listen to her dad talk to her down from her disappointment, but she's adorable, non-the-less.
02/19/20
Hello James. I enjoyed reading your story. The little girl was delightful. I really liked your description of the clouds and how they were shepherded along.