The Official Writing Challenge
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Cute story! I noticed some misplaced punctuation marks. I've learned to read the story backwards to edit it. I've caught many errors that way- double words, spacing issues... I liked your use of the child's way of talking.
Awww! I loved this story, thank you for the message and your entry.
Sweet story with good reminder of Who reigns.
This is really sweet! I can't imagine a 5 year old being patient enough to listen to her dad talk to her down from her disappointment, but she's adorable, non-the-less.