The Official Writing Challenge
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03/17/16
Excellent!

Blessings~
03/17/16
I really enjoyed the first stanza. I think you covered the topic word well in your poem.
I think this is a creative take on the topic. You definitely did a great job of showcasing the different ways to smear throughout. I know sometimes repetition is intentional in poetry, and I'm no expert on this genre for sure, but I think if you go back and look you might be surprised at the number of times you used the words back and act. You presented a lovely message. This is something we all need to remember from time to time. Nice job.
I think your poem nicely covered the topic. A few of the lines seemed redundant to me but poetry is not my genre. It definitely gave me food for thought.
03/23/16
You certainly captured the essence of the SMEAR topic. You kept my attention. Nice job.