The Official Writing Challenge
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I really enjoyed the first stanza. I think you covered the topic word well in your poem.
I think this is a creative take on the topic. You definitely did a great job of showcasing the different ways to smear throughout. I know sometimes repetition is intentional in poetry, and I'm no expert on this genre for sure, but I think if you go back and look you might be surprised at the number of times you used the words back and act. You presented a lovely message. This is something we all need to remember from time to time. Nice job.
I think your poem nicely covered the topic. A few of the lines seemed redundant to me but poetry is not my genre. It definitely gave me food for thought.
You certainly captured the essence of the SMEAR topic. You kept my attention. Nice job.