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A touching story, and so on topic! I almost felt as if I was right there experiencing it and love the way you brought Psalm 23 into it. I like to speak that over my grandson, who is still learning to talk, knowing that the words are going in whether he knows it now or not
What a beautiful, heart-tugging piece. Excellent imagery. Thanks you for this. Great job!
Oh my heart felt this entire piece from beginning to end. Powerfully moving, tender and content, delivery, and in truth.

You brought us into your world for a moment in time, and I thank you for sharing with us.

Having seen and been with this population during my career in Nursing homes, I am in awe of your dedication and strength, as this disorder can be daunting to the professionals, but on family it's twice as hard.

My heart goes out to you, and I know Jesus does love you both, as you go through this journey, He will never leave you.

You will be in my prayers,

I pray this does well on all levels.

I really like the affection in this, just how a wife should love her husband through dementia.
A problem to be experienced to be understood. Well written and most deserving.
This is absolutely brilliant. You grabbed my attention immediately. I seriously had goose bumps as I read the first few lines, then the bumps merged into a lump in my throat. You did an incredible job of pulling me into the story. I felt like I was right there. This is so powerful without being preachy and is one of my all-time favorites. You are a true artist.

I knew that in my heart of hearts that this poignant piece would score high!

Congratulations on your well deserved win on this tender and compelling story that had my heart and my undivided attention throughout.

May God Bless you~
Such a poignant, touching story. I felt the impact of the thunderstorm as you described it. I felt the tender, loving care that you displayed for your husband.
Congratulations on winning level 1 end of quarter. This is a great story and I can easily see how it was the best in level 1 in this past quarter. The message boards shows the other winners. Happy Dance!
You are a great writer. I can’t imagine what your life is like.