The Official Writing Challenge
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I thought that your poem was beautiful! And the words are so true. How wonderful it would be to rest in peace - confident in choices!And only longing for all that God has to offer - as opposed to being tempted and blinded by the false glitz of the world. Thank you.
This is a delightful poem. It spoke right to my heart. You did a fine job of matching it with the perfect Bible verse. Nicely done.
Each group of lines could contain a main idea or thought that would lead to the desired conclusion. Each group of sentences could contain either three or four lines to give unity of looks.

Winning a race starts out by taking that first step and that you have done.
Well done.