The Official Writing Challenge
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04/14/12
Beautiful devotional to the Lord. I enjoyed this. Thank you. God Bless~
This is a powerful mini-sermon. You make so many good points. I so agree about how things have changed in the US and elsewhere. It is so important to be politically correct. (insert eye roll)

A tiny suggestion -make sure you say where the verses are found and what translation is used. Also be careful in quoting songs so you don't infringe upon copyrights. Also give the title and composer if it is found to be in the public domain. You can do this in a footnote at the end and it won't count in your total word count.

Overall, I think you did a nice job staying on topic while presenting your POV.