The Official Writing Challenge
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Congratulations!!
11/10/16
Verna, Congratulations on your 1st place win in the EC division.

This poem brings back so many memories.
11/11/16
Congratulations, Verna, on your 1st place EC award. Your poem had feeling and movement.

I was wondering if dividing it into stanzas would make it more readable, but I think it would spoil the effect.
11/11/16
Congratulations Verna! This is a really lovely poem which paints a 'video' picture of November days. Even though my November days here in Australia are nothing like that, your poem captures the feel, sounds, aromas and joys of your November so well I am almost there enjoying it.
11/11/16
Congratulations on your win, Verna. Beautiful imagery in your descriptions. Like Ellen has mentioned, any chill November winds down here are relics of a winter that doesn't want to leave town. But you've captured so much authentic feeling in your work. Well done.
11/12/16
My absolute favorite line, "The sun takes longer naps..." and then you tie this together with your first two lines repeating. Love, love, love this! Congrats, Verna!
11/15/16
The second read through captured my imagination with a crisp breeze.
Congratulations on your EC win.