The Official Writing Challenge
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09/10/09
Yes, those days are easy to remember. And all the words for water make it worse. Great story. Loved the ending.
09/12/09
Tee hee. To this day, my sisters still call me hamster bladder. I kid you not. A very entertaining, playful piece of writing. :)
09/14/09
Utterly hilarious, and one of the funniest uses of Scripture I've ever seen in a challenge entry!
Very entertaining entry. I remember our youth group doing this to each other on long road trips. Thanks for sparking fun memories. Well done.
09/16/09
I still torment friends when they dare admit to me they gotta go;) I need to remember this scripture - perfect!
When I read this line, "Can we all meditate on this scripture?" my coffee came spurting out of my nose. I laughed so hard. This is so like a group of sibligs ganging up on one of them. Such an adorable, true-to-life vignette. And so skillfully written, too! Big time Kudos!