The Official Writing Challenge
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What a wonderful story…oh yes, God’s grace is immeasurable and an extra dose seems to always be presented to us, just when we need a little boost of it to “measure up”. Well done!
Well done. It reminded me of the phrase, "If God leads you to it, He will see you through it." He never fails.
I really enjoyed your story which gripped me right to the end. Thanks.
Lovely message along with excellent writing. I enjoyed it immensely.

God bless~
I really enjoyed this. I could feel the suspense building as the story progressed. It kept me engaged right to the last word. I also enjoyed the open ending, it allows the Holy Spirit to work in different ways in different people. Delightful reading!
You had me right there in the bus with Sybilla, which would have been no help to her because I didn't know where she was going. I love how you used the same phrase to produce contrasting reactions in her heart. Well done.