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10/25/12
Awww...I loved this story. The layers to this went beyond the words. God bless~
10/26/12
A lovely romantic story. I wonder if you left a 'not' out of the 4th last last line. Perhaps if should have said 'Us not growing old together.' (He couldn't imagine it). I enjoyed it. Thanks.
10/29/12
A beautiful message about breaking free and learning to trust again. Thank you for writing this.

God bless!
This is a sweet story but sad too. You did a wonderful job of showing the fear and pain in both of the characters. The description of the cup was lovely and I enjoyed how it symbolized hope, even though for the MC hope is a huge risk. Good job with this well-written piece.