The Official Writing Challenge
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03/21/10
Love your title. It truly is perfect for this story. You did a great job bringing this event from the Bible to life.
03/21/10
You've brought this episode to life with credibility and power. I love how you've described your MC's inner struggle succumbing to the confidence to persist in reaching the Rabbi.
03/21/10
You've infused this with a lot of emotion. Even though I knew how it would end, I got chills when I read your ending. Very nice work!
This is a beautiful story, where you took a story from the bible and told it from an interesting and different point of view. I love your MC's stuggle to speak to Jesus and her faithful determination. Excellent!
03/22/10
I've always admired this woman's faith and persistence, and you effectively helped us see the story through her eyes. Good job.
03/23/10
Awesome title, and what a great out of the box story for this prompt. My only red ink is that there was a lot of "telling" at the beginning. It took me a couple of paragraphs to get into the flow of the story.