The Official Writing Challenge
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09/03/15
Lovely story with a very true message. Your descriptions and well paced story kept my interest.
09/03/15
Beautifully written and so touching. It made my heart smile.

God bless~
09/03/15
Interesting story. Not sure if fiction or non-fiction. Either way, my sympathies for the honeymooners kept inching up as their frustrations rose. Good point of perspective at the end on the positive messages that came from this event. Nice job.
09/04/15
I thought this was a delightful reminiscence, brought to life with so many quaint but lovely observations. I particularly liked the phrase "tendency for economising on generosity." I couldn't help noticing that in your fourth paragraph you used the verb 'get' five times. This was a bit repetitious, so watch out for this and extend your word choices that little bit further.
09/09/15
The last sentence said it all. A great message for newly weds.